A continuation of last week’s
post:
Another topic in the
conversations I had focusing on writing centered on how the essence of stories
are lost in the verbiage the writer wants to use when stringing sentences
together. In other words, the writer
knows what he or she wants to write, and the sentences come out beautifully,
but the story is hard to find among the finely turned phrases. I think what
happens is the writer knows what he or she wants to say but gets caught up
"in the moment" of writing and the words get in the way.
For example, find any recent college or high
school graduation story, print or viral, and see if the story includes basic
information: name and location of school, the guest speaker, valedictorian, salutatorian,
what was said, how many students graduated -- you name it. Is it a speech
story? Depending on the guest speaker, maybe it is. But far too much time was
spent trying to come up with different adjectives and adverbs to describe a
run-of-the-mill graduation story without getting in the facts, takes far too
much time to write, and for the editor, takes far too much to edit.
How does this apply to writing
fiction? Ideas tend to grow from the inside out, like dropping a pebble in a
pond, and watching the ripples grow larger and larger. But writing is
rewriting. It’s like that unruly shrub that needs to be trimmed back. So get some
sharp clippers and have it.
Writers love to stand in shade
and drop pebbles into ponds. Who doesn’t? But the work of the writer is standing
in the sun, hot and thirsty, clipping back the shrubs to make them look like
something. It isn’t easy. In fact, a lot of times it just plain sucks. But in
the end it’s worth it.
See you next week!
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