Quick hits No. 1:
Over the past week I've
had occasion to talk about young writers and writing in general in four
completely different conversations with four different people. And I found
myself saying the same thing in each one.
First, let me say that when I am not writing fiction
and traveling down the road to publication, I work as a newspaper editor. I've
been a reporter and editor in the news field for over 30 years and I have a
degree in journalism.
These days I am a copy desk chief and page designer at a newspaper in
California. I read stories every day. I see great ones, good ones, average
ones, and just plain awful ones.
Then I go home and read blogs, Tweets and other
things on the web pertaining to writing: writer's block, not having time to
write, not knowing how to get started, and other topics that confound writers
of all stripes.
In each of the conversations I said basically the
same thing: A writer has to know what he or she wants to write about, they have
to have an idea of how they want to start the story and they have to know where
the story is going to go.
I also said that all writing answers the five Ws:
Who, What, When, Where, Why. And I throw in How for good measure.
Sure, it's an old saw from journalism school no one
seems to want to use any more, but I guarantee any piece of writing, whether a
news story or fiction or how-to book, will answer those questions.
For example:
"Shelly heard shots. Her new-mother instincts
kicked in before she knew what she was doing, and her precious Caleb was
cuddled in her arms as she quickly knelt to the floor. She didn't see the shooter but that didn't stop her
from reaching for the shotgun by the back door."
In one paragraph we know
Who: Shelly
What: grabbed her baby
When: When she heard shots
Where: We don't know, yet.
Why: She is a new mother.
This paragraph could have been in a news story, short
story or novel.
Overly simplistic?
I don't think so. It does the job and enables the
writer to get something on paper, even if it is only first draft
material. Give it a try!
See you next week.
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